tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7899507224894106796.post626877516740937907..comments2023-09-29T03:51:52.002-07:00Comments on Under the Fairy Dust: reluctantly reaching a reasonable conclusionKarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14270376783948053881noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7899507224894106796.post-88602001569193335962010-06-02T13:30:58.491-07:002010-06-02T13:30:58.491-07:00Carolina--Thank YOU for visiting! sometimes those ...Carolina--Thank YOU for visiting! sometimes those adverbs slip into our writing despite our best efforts, but you're right: they are often unnecessary : )<br /><br />Molly--yes JK Rowling has definitely attributed to my love of adverbs! I think I use them so much because of her (Jan Freeman's article was pretty much all about this, too). <br /><br />I still think adverbs have their place, but I'll try not to use them as a "crutch" in future. Thanks for the hugs!!! I think I'll need them...<br /><br />: ) <br /> <3333Karihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14270376783948053881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7899507224894106796.post-34943844453661456482010-06-02T12:57:17.427-07:002010-06-02T12:57:17.427-07:00yep...I'm fond of adverbs. Mostly because my f...yep...I'm fond of adverbs. Mostly because my favs (Neil Gaiman and JK Rowling to name a few) are <b>also</b> fond of them, as evidenced in their work.<br /><br />However, I totally agree (heh) that you can use a strong verb to create a more vivid image as well as a snappier sentence. I try to use adverbs only when I feel that they actually add something to my story.<br /><br />hugs for the adverb-weeding adventure ;)MBW aka Olleymaehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06311893784715159105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7899507224894106796.post-42112606234259700682010-06-02T11:44:55.132-07:002010-06-02T11:44:55.132-07:00Adverbs are sort of like grandma panties. I think ...Adverbs are sort of like grandma panties. I think we get a little attached to them cuz they've worked so well for us. But they're really rather hideous.<br /><br />I should say, though, that I don't think adverbs are always bad. In particular, it's the -ly adverb that seems to cause trouble. <br /><br />Thanks for stopping by my blog! I'm so glad I followed you back here.Carolina M. Valdez Schneiderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11589934533051907801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7899507224894106796.post-19145708025956318232010-06-02T11:00:57.471-07:002010-06-02T11:00:57.471-07:00fun might not be the first word that comes to mind...fun might not be the first word that comes to mind, but you never know, maybe i will enjoy it!! you're right, though--many times they aren't necessary. they may just be weighing my poor little MS down!Karihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14270376783948053881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7899507224894106796.post-21607378546751413652010-06-02T10:34:18.290-07:002010-06-02T10:34:18.290-07:00mmmm nah i'd say a lot of us struggle with it ...mmmm nah i'd say a lot of us struggle with it in the beginning stages of an MS. they're like filler words that help us get through the sentences. but in retrospect they're almost never necessary.<br /><br />like, you could say, "i ran quickly to the store"<br />but why not simply say, "i ran to the store"? the 'quickly' is IMPLIED in the act of RUNNING. not necessary.<br /><br />good luck weeding them out of your MS! hehe it's almost fun :DTaherehhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03111022596822176769noreply@blogger.com